I have a favour to ask. I've posted an extract from C19 at perfume_world (since yahoo is not loading great for you at the moment) of TWWC - basically the very first part. It picks up from where Chapter 18 ends and it's driving me nuts. I was wondering whether you could have a look at it and tell me what you think? It is very short.
I'm not asking for a beta but essentially whether you think that section works or needs a complete re-write, or anything between those two extremes. And no need to rush - I have plenty of writing to do, both for C19 and for the next Part of New Life - which I've finally started again! Yay for muses returning! That and some notes remian to be typed up. eeks!
TWWC
I have a favour to ask. I've posted an extract from C19 at
I'm not asking for a beta but essentially whether you think that section works or needs a complete re-write, or anything between those two extremes. And no need to rush - I have plenty of writing to do, both for C19 and for the next Part of New Life - which I've finally started again! Yay for muses returning! That and some notes remian to be typed up. eeks!
Thank you dear!
(P.S. How is everything?)